In my English class we were to read our essay out loud in our groups.I am in team 3 but I was to work with Team 4 for this. At the time not all of their team members were there. Listening to what there email etiquette was about made me realize that I am a very rude person. Theirs seem so nice and not like mine. I did not really know how to do this. I was outside my comfort zone. Being in a different group than my own that is. They are very nice people. In the group they really did not tell me any thing. Just that i could not use certain words and the first sentence i had was a big no no. I mean i did not want to critics any one and did not want them to do that to me either. I knew mine was not great. Listening to theirs made me see some ideas that maybe i could use.
At first mine was to emotional and very demanding. But when i went to the writing center one of the girls there made me change my whole story. And I went with it. It was more mature and in this one i was not rude. I am so glad, I hope I do not sound rude. But I might have been a little emotional again. I could not remember what we talked about. I have such a bad memory for every thing. And i could really just sum every thing i wanted in one paragraph. Which i knew that would lead me to a failing grade. After all of this I still dont think i would want any one to critice me for any thing. Or would want to read my essays out loud. Because i know i dont make any sense at all.
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