It is Oct 2, 2009 ( not really), and my group all made it on time to class. which was very awesome to hear. we were to get in groups of two to discusses our essay and do a time line for it. this being our descriptive essay. my partner was Pauline our team leader. very helpful and wonderful person if i might add. at first i was at a blank doing this assignment. i had no idea what we were doing. i didn't know the reason we went to the writing center was to pick the vlog we would be writing about. i felt so dumb but i couldn't let my team leader down so i had to remember the last vlog i saw. and that's how i knew that's the one i had to stick to since it was the one i could remember. besides the one with some krazy little boy and probably his dad helping him record the vlog he made. it was so weird. i didn't get that one at all. doing the time line i some what under stood what ms. Crawford was saying. our essay had to have feeling to it. not like a dumb old essay. but one that you had to describe in full detail of what the host is doing in the vlog. And whats in the back around. we had to make the audience feel as if they were there with him or at least watching the vlog for them selves. Ive never done an essay that we had to watch something and then write about it. well no now I'm lying, for theatre i had to go see leading ladies by ken Ludwig. And i have to write a critic about the production.
the time line was also something new for me to use in order to get the video in every scene. this is a new way to fo an essay well at least for a descriptive essay. im not to sure if i would be doing the time line in the furture but you never know. one day will come and i would have to do another descriptive essay which i dont dout about that. the time line would come in handing for that kind of essay.
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